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Chapter 9
Chapter 9 What Is Wrong With The Writer?
Author's Note: I wrote this chapter backwards. You can read it both ways. J
"Wouldn't that hurt?" Nick asked.
"Thanks a whole bunch. I hope we run into each other again," Afro said.
"Wait," Jake said running back into the gym and coming back out. "Here, this is a Hitmonchan for winning against my dad."
"Ahhh…I wish the girls would do that," Nick said. Everyone laughed.
^Really? Thanks Nick you are a great trainer! ^ Hitmonchan said hugging Nick.
"I know how much you wanted to go train at a fighting gym, so here it is."
^Yes? ^ Hitmonchan asked.
"Wait a minute," Nick said pulling out a Pokéball and calling out his Pokémon.
"Well, thanks to Afro and you guys he says he is going act nice," Jake said.
"After how mean he has been?" Samantha asked.
"My dad found out that he needs more Pokémon training, so I'm going to stay and train with him," Jake said.
Moments later…
Primeape grabbed Machop and put him on his shoulder and jumped up in the air, grabbed Hitmonlee, and slammed both of them on the ground.
"Now grab him and jump in the air and give Hitmonlee and Machop Seismic Toss," Afro commanded.
^Uh! ^ Machop said as he was getting hit.
"Primeape, Comet Punch Machop!" Afro commanded.
^Uh! Didn't your trainer ever tell you to clean under your foot? ^ Eleckid said grabbing his Hitmonlee's leg and throwing him up in the air.
"Hitmonlee…Mega Kick," Ken commanded.
^Yo everybody ^ Eleckid said waving his hands.
"Go…Eleckid," Afro said throwing out his Pokéball.
^Huh? ^ Primeape said.
"That's not fair…go Machop," Ken shouted throwing out his Pokéball.
Primeape grabbed Hitmonlee by the legs, and slammed him on the ground.
^UUUHHHH!!! ^ Hitmonlee.
"Brace yourself," Afro advised.
"Hitmonlee, get back up and Jumpkick him," Ken yelled.
^Ow! ^ Hitmonlee yelled in pain.
"Let go of him now!" Afro commanded.
^Uh! ^ Primeape said grabbing Hitmonlee by the leg and spinning him around.
^Take that! ^ Hitmonlee yelled
"High jump kick!" Ken commanded.
"Primeape don't just go rushing into fighting, you have to concentrate," Afro said.
^Ow! ^ Primeape shouted flipping over.
"Mega Kick!" Ken shouted.
^Huh? You're calling me a weakling? Ahhhh!^ Primeape said charging at him.
^Ha, a wealking to battle ^ Hitmonlee said.
"Go Primeape," Afro shouted.
"Go….Hitmonlee," Ken shouted.
"It was supposed to be a surprise," Afro complained.
"Primeape," Nick shouted.
"Don't worry it won't be easy," Afro said. "Because I have my secret weapon."
"Fine," Ken said, "If it's a battle you want, I can show my son just how weak you are."
"I just want to have a battle," Afro complained.
"Hey one time, my toy of the earth broke in half," Nick explains. "Does that mean that the earth is split in half? Darn it Afro, you wouldn't be able to get to other badges."
"Hey, I would like to have a battle," Afro said.
"My Machop is way better than your Pokémon," Jake said screaming at his father.
"Ha, you still have that Machop?" Ken asked. "That Machop is nothing, but a little weakling.
"Machop was fighting over fifty Pokémon non stop," Jake complained.
"Yeah, that puny idiot can't even beat a Metapod," Ken said laughing.
"Hey guys, I want to have a battle here," Afro scream.
"Wait a minute, he's your son?" Samantha said surprised.
"So son, you're back again to lose?" Ken asked.
"I want to have a battle," Afro said.
"Hey!" Nick shouted. "Aren't you the guy from Street Fighter? The video game."
"My name is Ken," Ken said.
"I want to battle whatever your name is," Afro said.
"I don't know," Nick said.
"I'm other words, what do you mean?" the gym leader asked.
"LISTEN," Nick yelled, "I MAY NOT KNOW WHAT WEAKLING MEANS, BUT THE WAY YOU JUST TREATED THAT CHILD WAS NO LAUGHING MATTER."
"He is a weakling, he should stop Pokémon training," the gym leader responded.
"How dare you treat kids like that?" Samantha screamed.
Tears went down the kid's eyes as he left the building.
"You're weak kid," the gym leader yelled. "You have no chance of beaten me with that puny Ratatta you have. You might as well stop Pokémon training."
"Return Ratty," the kid yelled calling back his Pokémon and running out of the gym.
^It's over! ^ Hitmonchan shouted Comet Punching a Rattata, causing it to faint.
"Okay Hitmonchan," the trainer said, "give it a Comet Punch!"
"Look! A battle!" Jake pointed out.
"No, but I'm scared that you will be scared," Nick said.
"Nick, you're scared of mice?" Samantha asked.
"Yeah," Nick said. "You never know, there could be mice in there."
"Let's take a look inside," Samantha said.
"Okay, here it is," Jake said showing them the gym.
At the gym…
"Okay then, follow me," Jake said directing them.
"Okay, but we're going to have to do it fast," Samantha said.
"But, we have to go to the gym," Jake said. "It's not going to be open tomorrow.
"But Afro, we can't go to the gym today we have to go home," Samantha reminded.
"Sure," Jake said with his head down.
"Hey," Afro said, "can you show me where the fighting gym is?"
"You don't know what that means?" Nick asked.
"What's lol?" Samantha asked.
"Lol!" Nick screamed. (*Author's note, Lol is chat form for laugh out loud*)
"Huh?" Afro questioning.
"But didn't not he get any hits?" Nick said.
"You put up a great fight…just try better next time," Afro said trying to cheer him up.
"Return Machop," Jake said calling back his Pokémon.
^Okay ^ Bulbasaur said grabbing Machop with both vines, and smashing him on the ground.
"Now, grab him with the other vine, and smash him on the ground!" Afro commanded.
^Uh! ^ Bulbasaur said pulling him forward and whipping with the other vine.
"Now, bring him forward and whip back!" Afro commanded.
^Uh! ^ Bulbasaur said grabbing Machop's foot with one vine.
"High jump kick," Jake commanded.
^Okay ^ Machop said sighing.
"Come on Machop, get up!" Jake shouted.
^Got you ^ Bulbasaur said catching Machop, pulling him forward, and Tackling him.
"Vine Whip into a Tackle!" Afro commanded.
"Tackle!" Jake commanded.
^I'm ready ^ Bulbasaur.
"Squirtle, good job return," Afro said calling back his Pokémon. "Go for it Bulbasaur.
"OH NO!!!! NOW IT'S A BUTTERFLY!!!" Nick shouted.
"Go Machop," Jake said throwing out his Pokéball.
"Return Ivy," Jake said angry.
"He shouldn't be listening to dumb idiots in the first place," Nick said proudly.
"Nick!" Samantha shouted. "You caused Jake to lose because you distracted him."
"Ice Beam," Afro said to Squirtle. Ivy was frozen.
"I do?" Jake asked.
"Here," Nick said disappearing and zooming with all these smokes coming behind him, across to Jake. "When you take your hat and turn it backwards, it makes you look like Baloo from The Jungle Book.
"What?" Jake asked.
"You know what?" Nick question.
^Ow! ^ Ivy said in pain because of Squritle going into his shell.
Squirlte went straight into his shell.
"Squritle, Withdraw!" Afro commanded.
^Uh ^ the Pokémon said wrapping it's vines around Squirtle and pulling him straight at him.
"Ivy, use a Vine Whip into a Headbutt," Jake commanded.
"Return Chika, Chika ka-boom," Nick said calling back his Pokémon.
"Nick this is my battle," Afro complained.
"Huh? Who's Nick?" Nick asked.
"Nick aren't you supposed to be in the bathroom?" Samantha asked.
"Get rid of that giant cockroach," Nick commanded.
^What's up? ^ Chikorita asked.
"AHHH!!!! A GIANT COCKORACH!!!!!!" Nick said. "Go…Chika, Chika ka-boom.
"Go…Ivy," Jake said throwing out his Pokéball.
"Okay then… I choose Squritle," Afro said throwing out his Pokéball.
"Two Pokémon is good for me," Jake answered.
"How many Pokémon?" Afro asked.
Outside…
"I haven't used the bathroom for a week," Nick complained smartly.
"Nick," Samantha question, "why do you always have to go to the bathroom when a battle is happen?"
"Wait a minute," Nick said, "I have to go to the bathroom."
"Let's have this outside," the kid said.
"Let's have a battle!" Afro shouted.
"He's going to say let's have a battle in fifty-three…four… zero…two…one," Nick said counting down.
"Here are your Pokémon," Nurse Joy said handing Afro back his Pokéballs.
"Hey!" the kid said. "My name is Jake and can we have a battle?"
"Nick and Samantha," Nick corrected.
"I'm Afro," Afro explained, "and these are my friends Samantha and Nick."
"I have," the kid responded, "but we keep losing each time so Machop has no confident that he will win."
"I believe you should train your Pokémon more," Afro said.
"Shut up Nick!" the beautiful Samantha said.
"Afro!" Nick yelled bravely, "I thought I told you not to turn on the talking device?"
^No ^ the Pokémon said, ^we'll just lose just like last time. ^
"You ready for our match Machop," a kid said.
"Okay," Afro said pulling out his Pokégear.
"No, really?" Nick said smartly.
"The Pokégear?" Afro question.
"Afro," Nick said, "why don't you use that talking device?"
"Chansey," said the Pokémon taking the Pokéballs.
"Okay Chansey, please take these," Nurse Joy said handing Chansey the Pokéballs.
"Nurse Joy, I would like to have my Pokémon healed," Afro said handing her the Pokéballs.
"Go on Afro," Samantha said, "give her the Pokéballs."
At the Pokémon Center…
"Let's head for the Pokémon Center," the lovely Samantha said looking at Nick, knowing she has a crush on him, but she then turn around because she figured out that Nick was looking at her.
"Yes," Afro said so stupidly like he's all that.
"Well," Nick said, "isn't it time that we head home?"
"He's talking about a fighting gym, stupid," Samantha said.
"Oh really?" Nick question, "there is going to be a gym where we can work out?"
"Okay," Afro said looking at a map, "I heard that there was going to be a gym here."
Author's note: Tell me what you think of this chapter at Whuzup65@hotmail.com.
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