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INCOMPLETE

by Annie

 (sequel to "Contagious")

 

Bryan had everything in life, money, and a great job, see he was an apart of a band called Westlife they were known worldwide. He had everything except Crystal. That was the love of his life might I say was she left him a year ago because she caught him cheating on her. She changed her phone, mobile, address, it felt like she changed into a new person. Bryan heard from her parents that she moved to the USA where she wanted to pursue her dream dancing. She wanted to become a choreographer. Or something along those lines.

Bright Lights, Fancy Restaurants
Everything in this world that a man could want.
I got a bank account bigger than the law should allow
Still I'm lonely now
Pretty Faces from the covers of a magazine
From their covers to my covers wanna lay with me.
Fame and Fortune still can't find, just a grown man runnin' out of time

He surely did have girls crawling over him but they weren’t Crystal, she made him happy, sad, everything. He couldn’t live without but he got the taste of loneliness. Crystal was still in dancing school but was to get out very soon and she had jobs wanting her already. She still wasn’t that confident since the break up she didn’t trust anyone and she didn’t eat much. She went depression many times, and was admitted to the hospital for suicidal reasons or because she fainted from not eating enough. 

Though it seems I have everything I don’t wanna be a lonely fool
All of the women, all the expensive cars, all the money don't amount to you.
So I can make believe I have everything, but I can't pretend that I don't
see. That without you girl my life is incomplete.

Bryan would trade all the expensive cars he had bought, his new house for Crystal to come to him. But she wouldn’t talk to him, she wouldn’t even hear of it. Crystal right now was doing video for Nelly, Aaliyah, Usher, Mystikal, Jessica Simpson, Linkin Park, Limp Bizkit, she was doing all of the celebs.

Listen.
Your perfume, your sexy lingerie.
Girl I remember it just like it was on yesterday.
A Thursday you told me you had fallen in love, I wasn't sure that I was.
it's been a year-Winter, Summer, Spring and Fall.
But being without you just aint livin' aint livin' at all
If I could travel back in time, I'd relive the days you were mine.

Bryan begged all the lads to go over to the USA to get some touring done there and so if he could search for Crystal. He had an ideal place where she was her parents knew that she lived in the California, Los Angeles area. 
All Bryan had to do was search for her in yellow pages, etc. He was going to do anything to find her, well it had to come to a halt when they had to practice to perform at the MTV Music Awards. But they didn’t know that Crystal was going to be they’re as one of the Backstreet Boys dancers since one broke their leg. Crystal was getting along fine with them especially Nick Carter. They went on a few dates had a great time and that was it, Nick knew about her past and a lot more about Crystal.

Bryan kept on playing the happy times he had with Crystal and she wouldn’t get out of his mind. But then the times he cheated on Crystal, neglected her, hurt her, he just wanted to take all of those back. It was the night of the awards Crystal was getting ready like 2 hours early with hair, little makeup, and deciding what to wear. It took her an hour to take a shower and do her hair, then make up that she did herself took another 20 minutes. Then she had to get her performance clothes ready and decide what to wear since she might win The Best Choreographer Award, which she was syched to see who won. Crystal wore to the awards show a black leather pants the had no sides they were tied together studded at the bottom, she wore black leather boots that were studded at the top. For her top she wore a dark red leather tube top that had no sides but were tied together with lace. While Bryan was primping himself up too, he had heard Crystal was going to be there and he wanted to look his best.

Even though it seems I have everything
I don't wanna be a lonely fool.
All of the women, all the expensive cars, all of the money don't amount to
you.
I cam make believe I have everything, but I can't pretend that I don't see
That without you girl my life is incomplete.

When Crystal arrived with the Backstreet Boys, Westlife had just come out and Bryan got the shock of his life when he saw when Nicky pulled out of the limo it was Crystal all he could do was mutter “Wow”. While the other lads were staring and couldn’t stop, let’s just say the last time they saw her she didn’t look as pretty as she did right then. Bryan was kind of mad when Crystal linked arms with Nick and walked down the red carpet together questions were going through her mind. “Is Crystal going out with Nick?” was the number one question popping up every few minutes. The lads didn’t notice that it was Crystal Bryan’s ex, but they still drooled over until someone ushered them closer to Crystal, then it hit Nicky that was Bryan’s ex and he glanced over at Bryan who was looking at Crystal and lost in his own world. Then he looked back at Crystal who was talking to some reporters and he got some of what she was saying “Oh, no Nick and I aren’t going out we are just going to the awards show as a friendly thing and absolutely nothing more!” Crystal stated to the reporter that was from MTV. Nick and her went along the red carpet talking and having fun and they were shown to there seats once they got into the palace that held the awards show, around 10 minutes later, Jessica Simpson was seated right in front of Crystal and they started to chat and catch up on old times since they had become good friends. Then Westlife all of a sudden showed up and sat next to Crystal and she didn’t notice except them who got shock of there life when they saw her face, the girl they were drooling at before was Bryan’s ex was all they could play back in there mind. Crystal was set to present the award for Best Soundtrack Song and Westlife to present the Best Choreographer which made Bryan pleased since he knew Crystal was going to win from what he
overheard people saying. When Crystal was going to present her award Nicky tried to make a move on her, she just told him to stop a few times and got and left. She went backstage and got ready; she was thinking about where to
sit after she got done and to get away from Nick. Crystal came up with sitting next to Jessica since there was an extra seat left. 

I just can't help lovin' you
But I loved you much too late.
I'd give anything and everything to hear you say, that you'll stay

On stage: Crystal just came walking down the stairs when she started to say what the TV thing said, “Hey you guys! Yeah I’m here to present the award for Best Soundtrack Song (smiles) so well let’s just cut to the chase cause I don’t like standing here in front of the whole world making a fool of myself like some do!” Crystal said and everyone started to laugh a bit “And the nominees are?” Crystal then stated and the played the vid for the nominees. First came Dream, BBMak, Mandy Moore, 3LW, then Westlife and the crowd went wild when they said “Westlife” and that’s when Crystal got a shock she didn’t know Bryan was going to be here let alone Westlife. Then she had to give the award she waited for a second “Well let’s just see what we’ve got here (Crystal said while opening the envelope) and well looky here
the winner is WESTLIFE (Crystal yelled but surprised they had won.)” Westlife got up and celebrated a little bit and made there way up to the stage and hugged Crystal quickly, Bryan was last to hug Crystal he held on to her and whispered in her ear “Come and talk to me after this! It’s really important and urgent!” and pulled away and made there speeches. After that they went off stage together, Bryan was trying to get an answer out of Crystal but she wouldn’t budge, until they walked to there seats and she said “I’ll think about it!” and sat down with Jessica. When the show ended even went outside to get into their limo’s to go the after party, Crystal wasn’t too sure if she wanted to go, she decided that she didn’t want to and go to the hotel and get some sleep. But she was the last out or so she thought, about 2 minutes of waiting for her taxi, all of Westlife came out and some with their girlfriends. When Bryan saw Crystal he went up to her and asked, “Hey can we talk?” “Ummm… I don’t know!” Crystal hesitated “Come on please!” Bryan begged. “Yeah I guess! Where are we going?” Crystal replied “Um do u want to go to a coffee shop or something?” Bryan asked shyly “Yeah I guess!” Crystal said. They went to the closets coffee shop that was open ordered some coffee and sat down at the table, they were quiet till the waiter brought them their coffee and they sat in silence again. Till Bryan spoke up and said “Crystal!” “Hmm!” “I’m sorry! Please forgive me! I didn’t mean to hurt you I swear! I would never do that!” Bryan suddenly begged. “I can’t Bryan! I just can’t! Do u know how many times I tried to kill myself? How much it hurt? I don’t think I can ever take you back!” Crystal with tears streaming down her face. Bryan tried to wipe them away but Crystal’s hand slapped them away “Bry I think you should just move like I’ve tried to do!” Crystal stated, “See Crystal I can’t and I know you can’t because u jus said yourself u tried and none of them worked out because u didn’t love the person! Like how u loved me and how I loved you! I know I screwed up but please forgive me!” Bryan said with a sorrow voice. It was freezing in the coffee shop or so it seemed to Crystal and she was shivering to pieces; goose bumps on her pale arms. Bryan noticed she was cold and gave her his jacket “Thanks! You were always the gentlemen!” Crystal complimented with a smile that made Bryan feel warm inside and smiled back.

Even though it seems I have everything.
I don't wanna be a lonely fool.
All of the women, all of the expensive cars, all of the money don't amount
to you.
(you can have it all) I can make believe I have everything, but I can't
pretend that I don't see. (Just give me my baby)
That without you girl my life is incomplete.

Crystal was confused she didn’t know if she should have taken back Bryan or not. But that was 3 months ago, she had said no to Bryan again, and felt horrible about it. She wanted to take it back but she didn’t want to admit she made a mistake, her ego took over her. The only person she kept in touch with the past 3 months was Nicky, who was the only one that knew Crystal was still in love with Bryan. Bryan had moved on to new girls but no one compared to Crystal, he had from Nicky that she hadn’t gotten another boyfriend let alone dates another guy. That was when Bryan got suspicious Crystal was the one to date a different guy everyday why was she not dating was what on Bryan’s mind a lot these days. He was so focused on Crystal that the girls he was dating got mad and dumped him cuz he was always
distant around them. Bryan finally figured out that he had to talk to Crystal and tell her that he still loved her, he couldn’t believe that he had let her slip away so quickly without putting a good fight. Bryan took the next flight from Dublin since Westlife had two weeks break to California non – stop, on the plane he was thinking of what to tell her, and what he would do with the heart break if she turned him down again. When he got to Los Angeles he went to the hotel he booked for himself the day before and went to the quickest phone book to look up the dance school Crystal
attended, he found the place and went to it. Once he got there he asked the owner if he could give Crystal phone number out but the owner wouldn’t but told Bryan that Crystal was coming in soon to get some dances done for a
video she was suppose to do. About 30 minutes later Crystal and a whole bunch of other people arrived in there dancing clothes, Crystal didn’t see Bryan in the back, they did 2 hours worth of dancing before they ended it
for the day. Crystal stayed back to get some more practice, but before she started Bryan approached her by the back.

Though it seems I have everything
I don’t wanna be a lonely fool
All of the women, all the expensive cars, all the money don't amount to you.
So I can make believe I have everything, but I can't pretend that I don't
see.
That without you girl my life is incomplete.

“Ahh” Crystal screamed “Sorry didn’t mean to scare you that badly!” Bryan said innocently “Oh my god I thought you were in Dublin or something!” Crystal said after calming down. “Yeah but I came here to tell you something really important!” Bryan said with a serious tone of voice. In Crystal’s mind she was thinking that Bryan was telling her that he was getting married or something along those lines. “Crystal I still love you!” Bryan said breaking the silence “I love you too Bryan!” Crystal whispered and Bryan couldn’t believe his ears. His heart did cart wheels, he was happy as hell, and he had the love of his life back. He gently moved Crystal’s head up and kissed her gently. Crystal kissed back with more
passion they parted and Bryan said “I’m incomplete without you Crystal!” moving a strand of hair away.

Sisqo - Incomplete

 

 

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