Re: The Quake

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Posted by Ryoga MKN on January 30, 1999 at 15:20:31 in 206.30.71.239:

In Reply to: The Quake posted by InsaneDream on January 29, 1999 at 20:20:52:

: The story as a whole... well, too much 'official' news footage. I personally would have liked more story and less scientific explanation. But thats just me.
: Then again, this story contains the single funniest line I have read in ANY N-fic.
: "Currently, Stacey was roasting a marshmallow over a candle."
: Now, I knew she was a total (totally!) valley girl, but this completely put her in a new mindset for me. Hehehehe... sorry, that line just stopped me cold and I started laughing when I first read it.

Once again, another good work Moore. Definitely B+ material, though the thing I was looking for: How did they get back to Videoland? Otherwise, one of the better stories, and realistic without stupidity or excessive violence.

Now if you'd only get rid of that Sins of the Father episode.....

'Da Ryoga is OUTTA HERE!

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Re: The Quake Mark Moore 05:39:55 2/01/99 (10)
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        Re: The Quake Cynthia Chan 13:02:21 2/01/99 (4)
        
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        Re: The Quake Spartacus 09:16:08 2/02/99 (1)
        
        Re: The Quake Chris 09:43:00 2/02/99 (0)
        
        the arguement of Moore and Chan(finally, it's not me.) Chris 09:40:00 2/01/99 (0)

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: : The story as a whole... well, too much 'official' news footage. I personally would have liked more story and less scientific explanation. But thats just me. : : Then again, this story contains the single funniest line I have read in ANY N-fic. : : "Currently, Stacey was roasting a marshmallow over a candle." : : Now, I knew she was a total (totally!) valley girl, but this completely put her in a new mindset for me. Hehehehe... sorry, that line just stopped me cold and I started laughing when I first read it. : Once again, another good work Moore. Definitely B+ material, though the thing I was looking for: How did they get back to Videoland? Otherwise, one of the better stories, and realistic without stupidity or excessive violence. : Now if you'd only get rid of that Sins of the Father episode..... : 'Da Ryoga is OUTTA HERE!

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