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Posted by Roll Light-Hibiki on July 11, 19100 at 05:53:11 in 63.20.91.113 :
In Reply to: Bitchings..... posted by Eric42 on July 10, 19100 at 10:11:30:
: From Mark Moore's new fanfic 'series' called "The N64 Team":
: "The N64 Team" is a spin-off series of "Captain N: The Game Master". It is the year 2000. The N Team has been disbanded for almost 3 years. But now, a new team is assembled - the N64 Team!
Ooooookay..........so far sounds like another bad fic from Mr "I have no life" Moore.Must have taken hours to come up with that one.
: "The N64 Team" was created for 2 reasons: 1) to move the story's time period up to the present and 2) to get me out of writing and editing a lot of stories.
: Oh, God forbid, we wouldn't want you to work!
PLOT DEVELOPMENT, CONTINUITY! GOD FORBID MARK! That might make you -gasp- A REAL WRITER! Then again my dear ecchi idiot,only a true writer can pull off a grand saga and you ain't one so that explains it.
: This series has a very different feel to it than Captain N had. It's about heavily-armed thriller-seekers who expect rewards for their deeds. They don't always behave ethically or morally. Yet they are heroes, and these are the stories of their exploits.
: This series is nothing more than a "group" of five females who are more or less been thrown together by you, Mark Moore, to satisfy your cravings. It's doubtful that you'll ever get any real "drama" outta this dang thing as your writing sucks to begin with and with the curve you've taken to adding tasteless and pointless pornographic scenes to your stories, you will not improve either.
It's sounds like those crappy shows like Cleopatra2020 or whatever that lame ass shit show is called.
"Hot babes kill things,act dumb and make lesbian remarks"
Yeah Mark,ya write like a retarded 12 year old with a masturbation problem and I've noticed your hardcore fans aren't much better.
If you want to write crap like that,make your own characters ya lame ass =)
:Anyway, the "new" five characters are... ALL WOMEN. Lora Croft, Joanna Dark, and Jill Valentine, to name a couple.
Samus will f*** Lara (Now we know why Mark was looking at Lara Croft nudie pics,so he could know how to describe her royal tits.) and the rest will join in because APPARENTLY Mark has NOW decided that ALL agressive girls are lesbians.Yeah..riiiiiiiiiiiiiight. Hello asshole,I'm a tough girl and I'm -gasp- STRAIGHT.I don't mind Mark screwing around with those other characters BUT I DO take offense at Samus being involved,she was my idol for a while.
: Here are the rules that the writers of the episodes have to follow. These rules do not apply to me.
: Mark continues to exempt himself.... it's not like he would actually use that to be truely creative in his writing though...
Mark is about as creative as a serving spoon.I really think he should just write Hentai,it's the only thing he even has a little bit of skill at.
Hentai is something any idiot can write,you don't need to be able to descibe things well,no plot nessesary,no characterization either.
Mark insults a REAL writer like myself,just write retarded hentai Mark and get it over with. You write worth shit,you're so lame that you have to insert yourself and slander your enemies in your books in the least creative ways possible.Mandi Paugh writes better and from me,that's saying alot.I've seen better stories from an 8 year old,at least they TRY.
