Here is one of my favorite poems, a villanelle by Dylan Thomas: DO NOT GO GENTLE INTO THAT GOOD NIGHT Do not go gentle into that good night, Old age should burn and rave at close of day; Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Though wise men at their end know dark is right, Because their words had forked no lightning they Do not go gentle into that good night. Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight, And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way, Do not go gentle into that good night. Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light. And you, my father, there on the sad height, Curse, bless me now with your fierce tears, I pray. Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light. ___________________________________________________________ I began to write villanelles after reading Judson Jerome's final column in Writer's Digest, "Can The Villanelle Yet Save Literature"? I am sure that it was partially inspired by his condition (dying of cancer) since the above poem was written by Dylan Thomas for his father who was dying of cancer. At any rate, I wrote my first villanelle the following day, with a dedication to Judson Jerome. It has been published a number of times to date: AFTER THE STORM Rainwater stands in rippling pools, or trickles by. Sharp fusillades of hail pelt down...and glance -- Far distant thunder calls, and echoes a reply. Sunshine, streaming through the clouds, lights up the sky; Like sunlight, shattered by a prism, rainbows dance -- Rainwater stands in rippling pools, or trickles by. In search of worms, a daring robin, keen and spry -- As warbling songbirds greet a pristine world, entranced. Far distant thunder calls, to echo a reply. The earth seems, here and there, to nearly liquify -- Stray raindrops falling, glisten...happenstance. Rainwater stands in rippling pools, or trickles by. In full glorious bloom, wildflowers revivify... Like tiny armies, windswept, sway and prance; While distant thunder calls, to echo a reply. Rows of thunderheads, arraigned, withdraw on high -- While shadows flee -- daylight makes swift advance. Rainwater stands in rippling pools, or trickles by; While distant thunder calls, to echo a reply. LYRICAL IOWA, 1993 I had researched the villanelle a bit in the meantime and found that it was originally a French pastoral poem, so my first effort was a pastoral poem inspired by the aftermath of a thunderstorm. I have since written a number of villanelles, and certainly will write more eventually.
___________________________________________________________ Here's one of my poems which was in the Writer's Digest top 100 in 1995: OEDIPUS WRECKS On occasion I feel That life is a prison -- The punishment is measured By how much your parents Have taught you To hate yourself... Childhood conditioning Stripes you in shades Of black and blue -- Sentenced by fate To regret lost opportunities... Caged with your destiny By striated memories That eat your insides Like an ulcer Grown cancerous... Yet, sometimes, Love can open a window For light to illuminate That stygian shadow land Of draconian disciplines Where regrets and mistakes Spontaneously combust In a blaze that Heats your heart -- Molten gold, Forged in a blast furnace: Pristine and pure... A covenant that links All your yesterdays To a shining Tomorrow. STAND ALONE, July, 1998 It was first published in a now defunct small press magazine in Des Moines called STAND ALONE, edited by John Gaps III, the author of a wonderful photo/poetry book called "God Left Us Alone Here". John was a photojournalist for the Associated Press at the time. The poem has been reprinted numerous times in several countries and on the worldwide web. Here is a political poem which does not address the scarey situation we find ourselves in at the moment, with a rightwing, parvenu President who is busy trying to recreate the political situation here in the U.S. which brought about the downfall of the Weimar Republic and the rise of Nazi Germany. He has destroyed the abundance and freedom we enjoyed under President Clinton with the second Bush recession in my lifetime, and is now trying to get Americans to spy on each other the same way the Nazis did. What could be more unAmerican than that? Of course, he was not elected by the popular vote, he was anointed by the rightwing Justices on the Supreme Court who were appointed by his father in a shameful "payoff", a time which will "live in infamy" as long as the Republic survives. The rest of the world must think Americans are totally nuts. Anyway, on to the poem: "...they need to learn that excellent poetry may--in fact, almost always must--express politcal, religious, or social convictions that they cannot share." Frank Kermode, quoted from the Atlantic Monthly, August, 1997 MAN IS A POLITICAL ANIMAL: THE ESSENCE OF BEING Red-orange, golden pink sunsets Bleed myopic sanguinaries, Endlessly... A rainbow or a sunset renders down To the various ways that light Refracts off of dust motes Or tiny impurities in the air. Both are expressed visually By moisture and light. Political spectrums suffer from the same Tricks of the eye... Conservatives mouth slogans which mean "We will bury you..." (Thanks, Mr. Krushchev.) Liberals mouth slogans which mean "You smell like you've been buried" While moderates move to another table And pretend they don't know either one. Democracy is in a bad way. 'Red light, green light', Put the pedal to the metal ... Society is on a one-way trip to Hell With the slide greased... You may someday disagree, From your jail cell... Republican forms of government Often fund bread and circuses Until the workers die off or quit working. Then the totalitarian nuts move in And 'straighten things out.' Are you an active political beam of light, Or a passive dust mote? Therein lies the question. _________________________________________________________ ------------------------------------- Scheherazade When the words stopped, Scheherazade stopped. She heard the words, sinking through layers of silence, saw them counter-weight the morning sun, she could not feel the air vibrating, she had no sense of spaces filling. ""I am dead, "" she said, ""I am dead and gone"". Scheherazade knows. She knows the light, the weight, the threat, of a morning sun; knows that words spoken at breakfast can eat you for lunch; she knows a thousand and one things that cannot save her -- now that the light has found Schahriah. ""I am dead,"" she says, ""I am dead and gone"" Scheherazade breathes, She does not feel the air vibrating she has no spaces which need filling all that remains is this quiet breathing ""I am dead,"" she says, ""I am dead and gone"" Copyright ??ennis Greene 2000 ____________________________________ Caps Turned Backward... Caps Turned Backward...Cooks Hill. Down the long causeways of pavement. Passing in row the Federation housing. Pastel colours rejuvenated after earthquake. The patchwork quilts of graffiti... Picasso'd in phosphorus. A sublime communiqu? Trees upheaving the black bitumen dismantle themselves. Their leaves falling. Crisp crinklers undertow a walkers papacy. The children on rollorboards wear brightly coloured clothing. Their caps turned backward. Weave cross-stitch in the patterning air.... Copyright ??avid Markey 1999 _____________________________________ NEWTON STEWART You asked me, Shay, to spin a yarn before your ears do chill, so since the seas are calm tonight, and you seem eager still . . . We'll count my tally, this tale be true, as all true stories go-- I'll tell you, friend, about a lass that swept clean through my soul. I bought a sloop, the "Thompsonpass", and from Kinnaird's Head did sail. For years along the Moray Firth, I delivered up the mail. At the Greenman's Pub in Kelvingrove, that's where I met Lenore; her father owned the tavern there and lands to the western shore. Black hair, blue eyes, a winsome smile-- no slimmer craft there be; I drew her from father's door, and she sailed away with me. At Creebridge House in Wigtownshire we dusted down through life; three children raised--now grown and gone, along with family strife. Fair haired Edie was the first to fly, her braids in Bill Durk's hands; then Eric with his staves and hoops in the cooperage trade did land. Maude, sweet Maude, our serious child to black Ireland's shores did flee; a schoolmarm and a spinster still-- no grandfather she'll make me. Aye, we tasted from our fingertips the salty Northern Sea, but cold and damp a damned wind blew between my love and me. I breathed a sigh and held her tight, she took a step or two, then turned and cried--"I'll love you, Newt, whatever we go through!" Lenore, my wife of thirty years went sickly on the vine; she died of fever from the pox, and passed before her time. So my love, like no other love, left me alone and free; no, not of my own choosing, for changelings are but we. Copyright ??onald Somersett 2000 YALL! COME CYBERING WITH ME I's a browser as I graze through cyberspace, Brushability is my game when I search throughout For the whereabouts of brunizem O away with dials yo' hold gainst' ears Can grow old on hold as yo' utter Words ya' hear: Sneers, clicks, no tones, screeches, Which causes jolts of brusquerie if you dare Intrude, such arrogance this bucko biz,' risk being Cloned a brute to spin as a buffoon Who suffers buck fever, or a bucksaw gnawing On a bassoon. But on the Net one can join a salsa set Cyber to discuss da' Met Meet Bill's as you scan through mates, Chat thru spats Can ignore a dull bloke faceless Who tells jokes As going sleeveless in Siberia Chillin' out ta' smoke OLE' grannies scan through Seniornet To scout aah' cruise Where either can do a buck-and-wing Or join a karaoke partee' to sing, "Nothing like an oldster" Grown bolder da' tune "I placed a bet on the Internet," Scroll a mouse, boot a lout Who ignores a TOS Surf murf, drink Smirnoff, Cappuccino, tea or cocoa Send e-mail, order a snail, swell a rat Who clicks to chat Gnaw and chew over the news, Placate a simpering fool Loop da' Web over Timbuktu and Tibet Glance at Japan, Taipan or Zululand Scroll on da' way to Pakistan, Rhoumidan, Then surf to Togaland. Perch on a chair anywhere Be an elephant-tusk Or donkeys-rear Who can fart and not Smell up the hemisphere; While digits do da' trot Whar' eyes reveal da' spots dat' sizzle Drizzle or fizzle. Ya'll can be aah' democratic nerd A nude who sits before a screen With a modem dat' broadcast Wheezes, groans, with erratic stops, Locks and pops. If yo' choose, can be ah' looker Who view a hooker To gawk, Salivate til' jaws lock. Or shop for BVD's, motor-ease Until yo' drop I's aah' yowl yowl browser, A download whizzer On how to build a Kayak, Control a Bat; Seeking the denizens of the deep >From the woo, woo world, Accessing mo' mo' bytes Than you can snake a pipe. <BR. Lol Lol! Y'all From The Pinder Poet: "COME TASTE THE SUGAR CANE--A View From The Staircase With Dialog." Copyright ??. L. V. S. Hopson 2000 ________________________________________ Final Reunion For everyone my brother there is this last migration: kindled autumn leaves fall innately to winters stroke, continuance wafts in warm, passage, across the stars, beyond the residue of earths light. In your final fleeting flight, I knew with you, I was carried within. Cruel circumstance tore us apart shattering hours, minutes of our expansive occasions together. And we acknowledged the appointed seasons set on us by our upbringing, losses endured, our parallel lives. Far-reaching moments, our rendezvous' short-lived reunion. You traveled unclear paths Years, to find seeds scattered, and the trackless earth delivered at the end. And all that you sought in life stood unearthed, my brother, family. Dedicated to:Richard Henry William Barnes 1946 - 2000 David deBarnes July. 2000 -14 ________________________________________ The Greatest Secret in Poetry "Its like dirty socks' ...He said. after reading my first concentrated effort at stanza and rhyme. Tears formed in my eyes; I was absolutely speechless. My whole body trembled as hurt turned to rage ignited by anger. I was unable to utter a word, before, he looked up and said: "It is not your eloquent display of form or your execution of discipline, it does sing a harmonic song ... with your usage of synonyms and antonyms, but the element which separates good from great does not exist ... Without it ... it's like dirty socks that you wash before wearing again. It is only read once, then fogotten." I answered; ...Everything! ...I have been taught is there. what element? He pulled his glasses from his face and, spoke: "Lean your head over here ... so I can whisper into your ear ... the greatest secret in poetry." When he had finished,I realized that he was right! From that day to this,I have been writing as he said On humor, jokes, love, death, nature ... anything and everything. Attempting to pull from the pith of my soul the missing element... Awaiting..the day when the critic's say: "He has STYLE!" The Quill 1999 ________________________________________ ________________________________________ "ECLIPSE" Midnight- Dialogues in blue Ascending to The flying of hieroglyphics Balancing purpler songs Tossing flowers into the winds Giving light Into the nights of Magic An enigma 22 You Like some circus performer with birds Painting dreams and Pointing to infinity and Absolute endlessness I wonder- I wonder who Were the progenitors to The cosmic confrontations What were the dialogues between you and Some descending angel? The view of life From the emerald planet Crab nebula man dissections Playing in the clouds of Your bubble dances Poets won and Poets too In awe of you The astral thinking projects Farewell shots ringing In my bed How did you become the ultimate Kite flyer Electric future man? The sky exploding into dust and You transcending into Your own Eclipse- Copyright Val Magnuson 2000 ________________________________________ Reclining Figures 1.# Overnight High tide carved sheer faces across the coastline Left skeletal trees upright once more Marooned, bleached reclined figures against the Ink-streaked Manuka skyline Plangent winds sculpt dunescapes reduce headland blood-red clay to sand 2 .# Skeletons arise from shoreline death beds Tales of cut the anchor and run run the in-going tide Smashed Hulls Spanish Galleons Dutch, English traders Riding the channel bareback 3.# The sea bed is cruel fate A sunken prehistoric Kauri forest, haunted Screaming lostmariners stumble, salt eye blind The mighty Kaipara Bar Harbinger of shipwreck 4.# Low tide, I walk this ancient coastline In footsteps of Ancestors Mariners I feel you I hear you Tangata Whenua those who lived the Kaipara Pakeha those who died entering her 5.# Now, resting I search Flotsam and jetsam spindle pieces Ovals with points Vertebrae And knife edges Bleach boned Soul cleansed (Dedicated to the mighty Kaipara Harbour and Henry Moore) Copyright Doug Poole 2000 ________________________________________ NATURE'S CHILD Blue herons fly on witches' wings; the egret, on angels' feathers. The black/the white, the day/the night, who is to say one is better? I live my life in sunshine; fight hard for every ray. I walk the straight and narrow; But sometimes loose my way. I ride the high, wide rainbow, am struck by lightning bolts. I wonder at the thunder, wild-eyed like a colt. I am a springtime spirit locked fast in winter's frost. I fight it though I fear it, to be warm again at any cost. For I live my life in sunshine. Will not wallow in the dark. To be and do 'til it's been and done. I will have left my mark. Copyright Karen R. Springer 2000 ________________________________________ THE DRAGON SPEAKS FROM WITHIN It's frightening how my brainwaves see The truth both stark and real How fantasy enlightens me With visions I can feel And often times in deepest gloom I sit midst fleeting clouds And listen as the thunder falls In deafening sonic shrouds The inner kingdom's vast domain In lofty shouts conveys A sense of hopeless destiny From which I cannot stray And when it's dark uncertainty Conceals the light of day I patiently await the wind To blow my mind away Oh can't you see the things I've said Are not the works of men They're not the fast enclosing world's Commitments to the end They're feeling hoping joy and love For things I can't convey The words cannot express the need For living every day I'm festering within myself I'm blocked at every turn By hypocritic pantomimes Of lessons yet to learn For education procreation Both to one point lead Fulfillment of a longing An in-born basic need Lord give me strength that one day soon I'll break the chains that bind And vomit forth in gushing streams The dreams that fill my mind That from these wastes the light shall grow And wrench the blinding steel From those who strive to hinder me From saying what I feel Copyright Ed Allen 1999 ________________________________________
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